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Thought i'd put in my two cents.

there is TONS OF REVERB in here.
And it gets drowned out by everything... making it sound crumpled..
Did you EQ this?

anyways... thats my only gripe.
FREAKING AWESOME LOL.
you get a 5 regardless of what i said.

WOAH That....

REALLY kinda sucks... honestly...

Your pitch is EVERYWHERE. Your progressions make no sense half of the time, song is COMPLETELY empty... Stock FL kick... minimal effects, no mastering, the only part i liked at all was 1:18 - 1:20... that first measure was KICKIN... right on pitch, perfect note spacing and sounded like a pro lead! But you went off pitch again.... T__T

Basically, work on filling up your songs ALOT, try not to use VOX until you've got instrumentals down (Only a suggestion) and google for some nice kicks. you'll find plenty just laying around on the internet.

Also... try some high hats, didn't hear any of those... clap or snare would be nice too... and maybe some reverb... but not too much.

\\ Thanks for reading... and mess with 1:18 - 1:20... that measure, is something that you could use... and even turn it into a FULL song with a bit of tinkering.

sorry for a lot of "THESE"... I sometimes don't know how to express myself in text form =3
\\

~aCeta

A bit better!

There's still some fuzzy in there... but it's better than before.

Now all that's left is making it sound less clumpy xD

I'm giving you a 4

Ragin-Asian responds:

ahhh i give up! it's so hard to make it loud but not distorted without going over 8 megabytes!

Uhh....

What Rawrthaas said.

Do me a favour... can you check out some of my stuffz? I'm running a bit low of reviews/votes... not getting very many hits.

It's saddening.

Lol Logic and Reason.

funny that you use this combination of music production programs.

I've always laughed... and now i shall cry because I am not using them.

<_<

for one, there's plenty of percussion... dunno what he's talking about...

for two.. .WTF AWESOME......... megamanish awesomeness.

need i say more.

I heard this song a LONG TIME AGO

I forgot who you were... lol...

I used to play this song while i played maplestory... must have listened to it on repeat like... .1274902157215 of times.

You are officially favorited... i shall tell all of my friends about you and your IDM.

-my Ex name: Sylacone... posh.

AWESOME

the beginning didnt catch me at all... the ambient noises alone sound pretty bad.... starting around 1:00 though... it caught my interest.

Love your vocal work, and the slow pace of the song.
The mix between an emulated guitar and the real thing made it sound surreal... very unique in my opinion.

Around 2:30? turned itself into a more mainstream type of song... something i'd hear on the soundtrack to some kind of movie. Freaking amazing.

You could do better....

Well... its all jumbled and broken into peices... all the samples you're using are flawless.... but they lack mastering and proper placement on your part.

before you remix things that already exist, try making your own stuff from scratch... try instrumental first before you add lyrics, tends to confuse people.

Also, this isnt really industrial.. sure the original song might be.... but this sounds more ambient.....ish.... no clue.

All i'm saying... is try not to just throw some samples together and call it a song.... some might just think of it as noise and you get people that zero bomb you.

2/5 3/10.

Like i said, try your own stuff first... get a feel for what you're good at.

Nedak responds:

I added most all the music first.

While I do agree that it needs work I don't believe it's jumbled at all. Everything is on beat, except for a few voice samples, which I did on purpose.

All of the samples have already been mastering...the only criticism I can give for that section is that the vocals are too loud at some parts.

While I agree it's far from perfect and that it has obvious flaws (I'd say it's more boring than anything) your review lacks more content and substance than my mix.

Thanks for the review though.

Oh, and I do agree it's mostly ambient...which is why I don't understand the "jumbled" part...since it's a lot of atmospheric sounds with beats....all on beat.

Pretty good for a new guy.

I'll tell you, for only being here for 8 days??

Pretty damn good. Here's a suggestion......

Listen to my stuff... then go on the internet and search for VSTs and Samples. You have the sequencing part down, as well as some awesome ideas. just keep it going.

Gave you a 3/5 and an 8/10... to keep you working harder to get your 5.
~kyle

ThunderHorseL responds:

I'm glad you were honest! :D

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