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Be creative!

I hear some preset loops in there.... also watch out for your snare... its a little.... off. its playing too late. Also, very distorted sounds over very distorted sounds make it sound like a meat grinder... dunno if that's what you're looking for.

your kick needs MORE. sounds like you went a DnB way to play... but would have been better with a techno pounder. Google search "free samples *** " where the ** is equal to what you're looking for (kicks, hi hats ect ect.)
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Pretty low rating for me... sorry, BUT at least it was in the right time signature, so you've got one up on some of the other artists lol.

Par0xysM responds:

Thanks for the review and criticism, my drum beats tend to be my weak part a majority of the time, I'll work harder with them.

Good news, bad news.

I know why it got Zeroed... this isn't really a genre of music that people go on newgrounds to look for. So you're fighting against the masses....

I shall review the song as it should be reviewed though... without bias.

3/5 :::: 6/10

Its not half bad... slow with a piano. Chip tones make it seem a bit interesting. I like the chorus you have in the background, although i wish you had some other sound for your piano, its kinda bland and does not fill the song with what I think I should be feeling. Odd selection of features if I do say so myself.... some kind of organish accordion thingy.... can't really explain it. In anycase... It was good for what it was, tons of room for improvement though, keep that in mind.

MonkeyV responds:

Thanks for the review.
When you say you wish I had some other sound for the piano, I'm not sure if you mean in terms of the general tone, or in terms of the melody I was playing o.O

I believe the "organish accordion thingy" you're referring to is: I used the synth trumpet from Guitarpro, made a backwards version of the melody I wanted, put it in Audacity, flipped in backwards so that it sounded correct, then did the same thing an octave higher and put them together.

Again, thanks for the review.

Its really good. Nice effects in the beginning.

My issues are...... because I have to be an ass of a critic.......
1) Fix the snare a bit... JUST a bit.. maybe not so SUBBY.
2) That saw is just horrid for me! Makes me shudder.....
3) Good job on the melody that you added in at 1:23, but maybe vary it a bit more and keep it a little more to you, and less similar to the song... also, try to mess with the sound, and try not to use the "Square" sytrus preset... (Forgot name)
[OR no presets for that matter... the songs sound much better if you at least tinker with the defaults...

Thanks for listening to my criticism, and also maybe listen to my song... it's not really a remix of the song.. but I used the lyrics in it, so I had to name it that I guess.
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Enjoi.

fishfood2021 responds:

I'll check it out. Thanks for the criticism.

Yo Echoz

My EDIT of this song is up.... review it all you want lol.

I also have another song up... another edit... oh well.. .Enjoi

EchozAurora responds:

W00t.. will check it out. That makes two remixes of this now. lol

Dood...

I'll tell you.. I can tell that that is done with a keyboard... not completely electronic. But I'll give you props cus you did it manually.

Melody is good. Just work on timing.

.- Kj

cool74 responds:

Well um not to say your wrong but um yeah it kind of is all electronic. bud thanks for the nice review.

Dood... I downloaded this....

A long time ago, but I have no clue why I didnt review.

Anyways, LOVELY job on this. You inspire me my friend.

WHY in gods name dont you have more reviews... You are an Underdog here, as well as I. You are talented and you should keep it up.

Thanks for making such a peaceful work of art.

-One suggestion...
I would love for it to be longer. T_T

Thats all..

Thanks again -
.- Kj

Almost too simple.

see... it sucks... cus you have the right keys, just... its 3 notes made into just nothing... I cannot give you a good rating. I'm sure someone will find this eventually.

wii1 responds:

Have you seen the Final Fantasy 7 scene where who was it? Tifa dies? It is very simple like this one.

Well.. I'll tell you what...

El good o' you o' mayn. chyeah.

Good job on this. Love how you cut it.
Can't wait for the finished one.

Meanwhile, check my page out, maybe my 3 songs of only will help you out with your stuffz. I'm not quite your style, but maybe, idk.

Thanks. -K-

WHY!?

Why in gods name did this get a 2.5?????

Seriousally... Talent = Right here. You've got it.

5/5 10/10

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